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They Will Do The Things by ~FallibleLove:iconFallibleLove:



1. They Will Find You

They will find your house. [your street is programmed to their minds] They will find the silvered treasures kept in simulated secrecy behind your vanity. They will find the moonbeams tucked gently beneath your pillowcase and the monogamous magic slipped inside your closet.

They will find your whispers even though they are as incoherent as your thoughts. And they will find the second-hand smiles you inconspicuously display.

And they will find you - amoung a sputter-and-flicker of
broken words,
        broken lights,
                 broken hearts.

2. They Will Medicate You

They will hand you pills [do not consume without first consulting your unconcsious conscience.]

They bestow on you
      capsules stuffed with antidotes,
      placebo-ed drugs to beguile your intellect,
      corrective tablets, defective lozenges,
      and cathartic sedatives
to remedy all your fictitious aliments.

3. They Will Have Everything You Need

They have green eyes, summer grass eyes, emerald city eyes.
They have posture, poise, and possession
        [possessive hands and poised spines, too]
They have your poetic lines,
and words,
and lips.

They have strong-willed, sunny thunderstorms that bend down and bay unto your fallen arms and falling faults.
They have your dreams, all those nights kept up by nightmares.
©2008-2010 ~FallibleLove
:iconfalliblelove:

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Full Title : They Will Do the Things You Never Dreamed


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:iconzelme:
They have green eyes, summer grass eyes, emerald city eyes. Absolutely brilliant line.

They have strong-willed, sunny thunderstorms that bend down and bay unto your fallen arms and falling faults. This one, too. :thumbsup:

I am quite impressed with this. Your style is very mature (much more so than mine when I was fifteen), and I will look forward to reading more of your work.

Well done! :)
:iconfalliblelove:
Thanks so much!
Your words are much appreciated :)
:iconzelme:
You're very welcome.
:iconchasm-da-echidna:
i like the flow, and there are powerful ideas in there!

--
Quitters never win, winners never quit, but those who never win and never quit are idiots.
:icone-pox:
I can't stop reading it over an over, very very good stuff!

--
If God Loves Ugly, Make me his favorite kid...
:icone-pox:
you can deny it, it is what it is, an that piece is amazing!

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If God Loves Ugly, Make me his favorite kid...
:iconchasm-da-echidna:
no problem :)

--
Quitters never win, winners never quit, but those who never win and never quit are idiots.

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